![]() |
|
|
. . . . . entries for 8.11.05 . . . . . Nicole posted sonnets. I've written a couple sonnets in my time, but they were pretty bad. My haikus are better. So here are some recent haikus. (Admittedly not my best work - deal with it. xD) These are just in the order I jotted them down one night. like faded denim or my purple right ankle softer than you think she ignored the rose when it was fresh and flawless and noticed it die vertical stripes draw the eye more than mine ever have or ever will a nightly haiku seemed like such a good idea until the next day no one has more faith than he who named himself for one called the skeptic the world is burning my logic feeds a white flame and I hold the match through ivory gates this old electric blanket throws false warmth and dreams sleep would be nice but there's something I need to write I just don't know what the lake nurtures life on her banks but her depths freeze when the winter comes I never believed that this little stone would burn like I said it would it's easier to hate mountains than to forget what lies across them it's so typical to feel misunderstood that guilt preempts my tears the sapling that bends when young grows groundward until it buries itself I was feeling emo that evening - can you tell? xD
Comments:
You write nice haikus,
and they're really emotional, I think they are cool. Whee, there's my haiku. Nice writing! Were you at all inspired by Cryptonomicon and the haiku-writing Bobby Shaftoe? (That is his name, right? It's been so long since I've picked up that book)
Yes. Actually. xD Cryptonomicon is my basis for everything I enjoy in life. (That statement is so close to being true it's depressing.)
Post a Comment
come home? |
.:people:.
{ting} .:past:. April 2002 .:skin:. turtles! turtles! by araglas |